Today I Saw a Teardrop

Today I saw a teardrop 

Just resting on my sleeve

He said his name was "Heartache"

And he came to watch me grieve

He showed me many horrible things

This drop of liquid pain

I tried to wipe this tear away

But it turned into a stain

The stain said, "Look a little closer,

And tell me what you see"

The more I looked the more I tried

To rid this stain from me

Another tear ran down my face

And was sitting on my cheek

My sleeve again wiped it away

Then he started to speak

He said his name was "Past Regrets"

"And the things you see are true"

But as I peered inside this tear

All I could see was You

Reviews

[pinpen]

Wow, i totally loved the last stanza, so tugging, nicely done.

[Tasha]

Wow Whiskurz! This was amazing and so beautiful. I've missed your writings. Great work as always!!