The Five Senses of Love

I'll hold your hand and keep you close

It's something I love to do

I come alive and forget to breathe

Whenever I'm touching you

Your perfume wakes the morning sun

The envious flowers as well

For their fragrance is always second best

When the breeze picks up your smell

The food of the gods has been retired

Their ambrosia has been replaced

Your lips are now their prized possession

For there's nothing like their taste

Each time you speak the angels will come

They listen as they draw near

For they've never heard a voice so pure

And each one has to hear

God made the sun, the moon and the stars

To keep you in the light

The world couldn't miss this treasure He made

For you're His most beautiful sight

Reviews

I love this - it's really sweet.
"God made the sun, the moon and the stars
To keep you in the light."
You write so beautifully. Keep up the amazing work!

[Suditi]

Truly beautiful.

Very beautiful, heartfelt, and again, my compliments for your structure! as you're great with them.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem of love. I like the flow of desire and the outstanding of love and appreciation in your words. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Thy heart of stone no more written within these words I adore. Splendid!

[patricia]

it seems love brings out the best in your writes. Very moving. Enjoyed.

[pinpen]

Such a sweet and wonderful write

[J. J. Nightingale]

This is sweet .. and from a heart of Love .. I like !

Jasmine .. :)

[Sydnye Louise]

I love this one. Excellent choices in words, any others couldn't have been done better.