Afraid To Fall

Afraid To Fall

A Poem by Whiskurz

You want me to say I love you
But I can only say I care
You want me to tell you all of my dreams
But I tell you, I don't dare

You ask me to hold you closer
But this is as close as I can get
You ask me to show you affection
But I'm just not ready yet

You need me to make you happy
But I don't know I can
You need me to say I need you
But I'm not that kind of man

You love me the way you're supposed to
But it's love I can't return
You love me unconditionaly
But it's love I'll never learn

The reason, I've hidden inside my heart
But I guess maybe most of all
No one ever steps into love
And I'm too afraid to fall

© 2012 Whiskurz


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I've been on both sides. They do both suck. This was a great write. Music is my life and its a compliment when I think of a song in someones wrting. This reminds me of learning to fly by tom petty and he heartbreakers

Posted 12 Years Ago


oh. well... i have been on both sides of this problem, and i can tell you i, personally, think that the unrequited side sucks to be on the most :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow... okay I'm just speechless and I'm going to leave it at that... I have more I could say, but I'm gonna shut up! Great write, full of emotion and it speaks volumes.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Under pressure or locked up? Either way...You consistently make it look easy to express in written form...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think a lot of people especially artists can relate to this poem. very touching. You can feel the emotion in this. Great work.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 24, 2012
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