The Raindrop Poem

The raindrops melt on the hot tin roof

As they slide to their demise

Sounding like tiny angel's feet

Descending from the skies

The smell as it hits the gravel roads

Is one I truly adore

That smell alone can heal the soul

And leave you wanting more

Sooner or later the raindrops meet

Where other raindrops huddle

A reunion of sorts in the middle of the road

Together to form a puddle

No one knows what raindrops say

When they finally come together

But wouldn't be funny if they meet in the road

Just to talk about the weather

The next time you see a raindrop fall

Remember what you have read

Then maybe you will be the very first

To tell me what the raindrop said

Reviews

[hoonsha]

This is adorable, I could see this stenciled on the wall of a nursery. It's happily thought provoking and leaves the reader with a smile.

Your adjectives were pleasant and your opening stanza is very graphic.

[kadian fraser]

this poem is awesome it made me think of the rain in a different light

I really enjoyed this emotional read, so nicely presented.

[K-mo]

this is a great poem! it is such a happy poem and it's well written too!!