Sunshine Love

She saw him on the sidewalk

One evening in the spring

He was tall, dark and bashful

And quite a handsome thing

He never seemed to say a word

Each day as she passed by

He thought she didn't notice him

Or maybe, she was shy

Everyday when the sun came out

She saw him on the street

She wondered if he'd look her way

Or if they'd ever meet

He tried his best to call to her

But he couldn't say her name

He wanted to tell her how he felt

And hoped she felt the same

The sun had introduced them

But it just wasn't meant to be

For shadows couldn't fall in love

They're only made to see

Reviews

[Patrick]

i agree with 'lazylines', there is something pleasant about this, your metre and rhyme together with the story forges a welcome tale

[~LadyWolf~]

Very beautifly up together :)

[lazylines]

your cadence is comfortably familiar. I float the lines as I read. Its pleasant, the twist. -ll-