Forever

Pieces of forever

Cast upon the ground

My hopes and dreams now turned to dust

Never to be found

While looking for a reason

A memory hits my sleeve

The memory when you walked away

And I begged you not to leave

As I wipe away the liquid pain

I know our time has passed

Forever's not that long at all

Somehow it doesn't last

Reviews

[Olivia Marie]

I love all of this, especially the phrasing "liquid pain" and the poem is not that long, but it has a definite effect on the reader, for most writers have at one point felt heartache, and this is written beautifully and pulls at those emotions. Amazing.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Such heartache when love turns out to be a lie and all our hopes and dreams are crushed. This is a lovely piece of writing, very deep and meaningful.

[sirenribbon@thehptshirt..]

The first stanza is stark and it only grows darker from there. As maybe forever becomes apart of all our futures...

In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.
Robert Frost

[rnuff]

Love the last stanza, amazing write

[The Dreamer]

"Forever's not that long at all
Somehow it doesn't last"
Lovers always say that they'll be together FOREVER.
once someone told me - "Forever is the biggest lie on earth"
i never wanted to believe it - but it IS TRUE.
well done.

[judith106]

This is really awesome... I feel the emotions

[~LadyWolf~]

Very nice!

[Kortney]

Very relatiable. Very nice!