A Tale of Two Hearts

One heart is forever scarred

The other, oblivious to the pain

One heart feels a terrible loss

The other, no loss or gain

One heart feels hopeless regret

The other, no regret can be found

One heart cries out with blame

The other, not even a sound

One heart keeps looking for fault

The other, no reason or rhyme

One heart hangs on to the past

The other, no concept of time

One heart keeps looking for answers

The other, not wondering why

One heart looks for a second chance

The other has said goodbye

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

You have expressed what I have noticed in many relationships-one always cares more than the other, whether it's love itself or trying to find solutions to problems! Great write!

[~LadyWolf~]

That is very beautiful :)

[Nicola Farren]

This is good. You also write well. I can tell we have similar inspirations(life and personal experiance) x

[The White Wolf]

Oooh, I like this, Whisk. It always comes down to that, doesn't it? Nicely written.

[Kortney]

Put together very well.
I enjoyed it alot!