Two Fires, One Flame

As passion burns, my heart starts to melt

Consumed, by the flame that is you

A fire so bright, that the sun starts to fade

Confused, it knows not what to do

Your breath on my skin can offer relief

With the warmth, I feel in your touch

The minute you smile, the light blinds my eyes

If I stare at your beauty too much

The moment you speak, a whisper of love

Can offer a kind gentle breeze

The beat of your heart makes time stand still

And can bring me to my knees

Each time we kiss, the embers awake

Surrounding our love with your fire

Alarm bells ring, when we finally embrace

From the overwhelming heat of desire

The love that we have, no one can touch

Two fires, with ony one flame

For no one has felt the love that I feel

And I know that you feel the same

Reviews

[judith106]

I typically dont like poems about romance or love but this is so different. When I read it I felt a secretive , intense and almost painfull feeling about the desire for the one you love. Another great one...

[Liderien]

this is very beautiful indeed. So romantic and pure.

[Emerald Seas]

Beautiful! You have a way with writing romantic poetry, Whisk. Your rhyme scheme is consistent - flows wonderfully. Another great write.