Let You Go

You've said the words I refuse to hear

I beg you take them back

You want me to say goodbye I fear

The words I somehow lack

You said I knew this day would come

But I must disagree

I know this happens sometimes to some

But not to you and me

You said you no longer feel the same

But my love keeps growing stonger

You say it's you, I'm not the blame

Please try a little longer

What must I do to change your mind?

You say it's set in stone

A love like this is hard to find

You say you must move on

You walk away and say goodbye

There's one thing you should know

It doesn't matter how hard I try

My heart can't let you go

Reviews

[Joel Adenyn]

I like it. I'm not much of a poetry buff, but it flowed well. The rhyming words weren't a stretch. They fit. And it makes you want to hear the actual conversation that's going on.

[persianleopard]

Nice. I like this. It's so valid.

[Sophie]

Oh my gosh, this is so sad, but so wonderful. I can only hope its not based off true events happening now. This is so heart-wrenching, its beautiful. Keep it up, the last line is perfection.