Engine

My heart 

an engine full of backfires

and false starts 

Reviews

[Neville]

Delightful.... I think a lot of folk will be able to relate..... top marks from me.. N

[Laura Kate]

Thank you Neville!
Laura.

[Neville]

pleasure's mine..

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

I like the metaphorical words employed here.
Heart could sometimes get out of control and you won't know which feeling is true or false or even both of them are jumbled.

Well written, Laura.

[Laura Kate]

You are very right there Kay, thank you so much for your kind review,
Laura.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

My pleasure... Laura