Dreaming

I had forgotten how it felt

to reach for you 

eyes still closed 

hair tangled 

lips seeking 

reaching 

for warmth 

naked skin 

and a touch 

just one 

single touch 

of the hands 

fingers 

elbows 

knees 

feet 

there 

we’re here

both here

still here

all is fine 

you and I 

and to smile 

returning to blissful dreams 

knowing that my sheets 

are full of what dreams are made of

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

lovely dream indeed ... very tactile and emotive setting, scene and characters ... no need to define more that what's offered ... certainly most of us have, and/or have had such dreams ... and to wake to find our lovers in hand ... and so close is a marvelous human experience .. unique to us ... wonderful read start to finish ... perfect title ... thanks for sharing, Laura
E.

[Laura Kate]

So lovely to read your review, E. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Best wishes,
Laura

[Curtis.Lenker]

Very beautifully written poem here. I enjoyed this on e a lot. Very romantic and passionate. Good job here. I really liked this one.

[Laura Kate]

Thank you! so glad that you liked it.
Best wishes,
Laura

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Wow a sensational saucy poem! Romantic and poetic a return to passionate rekindled love ... Kudos.

Pls pleez do review/ comment/ write your thoughts on my newest poem too.

[Laura Kate]

Thank you! I'm so glad that you like it. Nice to meet you, I'll look forward to visiting your page soon :)

[Dennis Shanaberg]

A beautiful poem. And I can relate to just the simplest touch producing such a strong feeling of comfort. Your words really make it easy to think back to such times

[Laura Kate]

Thank you so much Dennis. Nice to meet you! I look forward to reading some of your work.
Laura.

[Chris]

I like the emotion within this piece and the "heart" it defines.

[Laura Kate]

Thank you Chris, much appreciated.

[Chris]

Well, it IS and it DID... and you're welcome.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

To be enveloped by blissful love; like a cocoon of silken blanketed ecstasy - how poetically addressed within the dripping stanza wordplay of your luscious piece - certainly has the ahhhh factor! Lovely write ...

[Laura Kate]

Thank you Phill, for such a lovely review. It is nice to meet you! I'll look forward to visiting your page soon.
Best wishes,
Laura.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, like it almost happened....or did it?
sheets of white have words describing it..but did the real thing happen or was it only dreamed...

if only closing the eyes could accomplish this....

j.

[Laura Kate]

Only almost, Jacob. Or perhaps a Dream of fragmented memories.
If only..!
I suppose it did in a way.

Thank you for reading, Jacob.
Laura.