Predictable

Predictable

A Poem by LawrenceRaybon
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A poem that analyses the predictability of people.

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No, you started at the
Wrong end of things!
Only now, you have fallen for my
Devious inversion technique!
Everyone falls for it in the end,
Don't feel bad!
I know you have been trained to 
Start at the top!
Predictable, that's what people are,
Unless shown new ways to think!

© 2014 LawrenceRaybon


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LawrenceRaybon
Don't get it? Here's a hint: it's an acrostic...
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Upside down.

"Why should you hoot,
you always toot?
Look for the root,
It's not always the fruit
that will end the pursuit
Take a different route
Don't be a coot
or even a moot
just be astute
but not that brute."

LOL. Just motivated by your clever piece here, Sir. I like challenging poems/riddles like this.
Brilliant!
Thanks for the share.


Posted 10 Years Ago



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LawrenceRaybon
LawrenceRaybon

Jackson, MS



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