Faye

Faye

A Poem by LawrenceRaybon
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My attempt to combine acrostic and minute poetry forms.

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Nightly you appear in my dreams

Often it seems

That you are near

Forever here


Only to demurely depart

Re-break my heart

Gone far away

Oh my sweet Faye


That I could have a moment more

This I implore

Endless, your sleep

Nonstop, I weep

© 2014 LawrenceRaybon


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LawrenceRaybon
Keeping in mind that this is both an acrostic and a minute poem, what do you think? How could I improve?

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Added on May 2, 2014
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LawrenceRaybon
LawrenceRaybon

Jackson, MS



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