Obstinate

Another silly little poem

I wouldn't, I couldn't,

I can't and I won't!

But not because you said

I shouldn't and don't!

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

Lol! My mother has called me obstinate since I was five years old, and this short piece captures that sense of bull-headedness perfectly! :)

[Ethan Lewis]

I think you meant to say not because you* said

[LawrenceRaybon]

Nice catch, I'll change it now! Thanks!

[Ethan Lewis]

I'm pretty anal when it comes to grammar, so I catch many things haha. No problem.

[LawrenceRaybon]

My philosophy is that I'd rather feel like a moron for a few minutes when someone points out my stupid mistakes (and then I can fix them) than look like a moron forever (because I don't know there are stupid mistakes to fix)!