Daffodils

Daffodils

A by Vertigo

We burn like daffodils in an open field that sway endlessly with a lone ashen tree as company and the mountains barely risen in the fog...I sit with my knees bent as the sky unfolds and the world is newly awake...and
it
all
sinks
in

© 2009 Vertigo


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This is a breathtaking vision in depiction of the ash tree and the field and the way you use
imagery to depict an emotion of solace and solitude, depth and focus bring your words to life :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Vertigo
Vertigo

Lithia Springs, GA



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My work...does have personal meaning, however in poetry it's about how it makes you feel or how it speaks to you... -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------.. more..

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