Without A Tomorrow

With no expression that takes and takes and takes and we make without a tomorrow... all that is in place fighting our present state so that we can at least try to make a difference with all the breaks in the music we play that run into each other...Its a strange world we live in...hiding behind the sorrow of endless waiting stealing time with a weak grasp like living in a time lapse that runs into itself...if you looked back would you be able to see it? Believe that nothing is real, even if it is solid, for perception over-rules

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[judith106]

With no expression that takes and takes. We make without a tomorrow

[judith106]

I really like this...there is a depth to your writing that gives me a sense of hopelessness.. I think any writing that can evoke a deep emotion is a good one. I would say to omit one of the " takes " in the first line. Thanks for this