ode to my friends

Oh! my friends

how great they are

my guiding light

their like a bright shinning star

guiding me throught my life

with their light

near of afar

through the night

always there never far

wrong or right

my dear friend

my guidng light

Reviews

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nice simple poem, lighthearted and sweet, consider adding why your friends are so great in a concrete example, show rather than tell.