Elements of Harmony

Elements of Harmony

A Poem by Ashley G.
"

A friend gave me the idea.

"

Loyalty to another 

means staying by their side.

Loyalty in respect 

leads to the need to protect

the one who has your loyalty. 


Honesty is the best policy 

Even though you may be chided

Honesty is best decided

without the thought of lying.

For you trouble will be two-fold

so its best that truth be told.


Generosity.

Be generous in kindness,

prayer and peace of mind.

Money should be handled carefully 

when you think of generosity 

For it may be burnt on self desires.


Laughter is the soul’s medicine 

So laugh and laugh all day.

Laugh until the stomach hurts 

and troubles fly away.


Kindness is not a weakness 

or so people seem to say.

Kindness though has many a price to pay.

Kindness can be a strength in the inner wars we wage.

But it can turn to blindness as we walk our chosen path.


Magic is friendship!

Friendship is Magic!

So there you have it...

© 2012 Ashley G.


Author's Note

Ashley G.
'There you have it' review please! =3

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Seems to me like all the Mantras to make a successful marriage. Sorry interpreting it this way coz that's my situation right now.
You have written extremely wisely and wonderfully!

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's a nice write but I cannot review any better as this is simply not my forte.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A very nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I agree with Marie, the last part kinda dropped the whole thing, but it's great overall. It took me getting to the last part to figure out it was a MLP: FIM reference. :) I love the thought you put into it, it's amazing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is very well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


the so there you have it is dragging down the poem,

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ashley G.

11 Years Ago

I couldn't think of anything for the last stanza and rushed through it...
marie

11 Years Ago

ah... well try putting a little less thought and more emotion then? it helps me
Ashley G.

11 Years Ago

K. =3
No offensive, I think you should take out "so there you have it..."

It adds an UN-needed awkward moment at the end...beautiful:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ashley G.

11 Years Ago

Oh, okay. Thanks for the advice.

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