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An Obituary for Jane Doe

An Obituary for Jane Doe

A Poem by Legion

An Obituary for Jane Doe

She was poetry in motion in a place penned only in prose.
She sought to soar with ravens but was savaged by the crows.
She longed for a legendary life while stuck in her sedentary shell.
Her grand finale never fulfilled; a fruitless life languished in hell.


© 2017 Legion

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Short and not very sweet, but quite well written-- it is no small feat to capture a life within a few lines, even a life of despair.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! short and complex, and it gets the point across beautifully. I love the rhyming couplets; it's a very nice touch. Overall really good job!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on December 8, 2017
Last Updated on December 8, 2017



Nowhere near a BBQ pit!

I write about various topics. Mostly I write poetry/songs. I took my screen name from a concept album/epic poem I wrote years ago titled "Legion's Legacy: Tales of the Damned" which was inspired by .. more..