She Likes Poultry

Something fun I was goofing around with. But I hope if I ever become famous for my writing that people don't consider this the pinnacle of my work. LOL

 

 

 

She Likes Poultry

 

 

 

My gal she lieks dat poultry

Always readin up on da stuff

Books an ledders frum lubbers

She jest cant git enuff

Shookspare wid his

Rumao an Julia

And Darndes Inburno

She says will do ya

Bud her favoright

Ov all dat poultry

Is wun wridden

By her won an onlee

 

Sew take dat all you

Wridders ov poultry

Wid ur witz and ur wurds

Hur hard belones

Two me onlee

Cause mie poultry makes us lub burds

 

Legion

30June08

Author's Note

Seriously, I hope it's not my pinnacle. :)

Reviews

[Angelheaded Hipster]

This is cute...a write from a love struck illiterate guy. I had a smile on my face at the end of the write, and you know...it says a lot....its not the words, well, it is the words, but its also how they are portrayed.

Its the message, no matter how badly misspelled.

[Time Lapse]

Nice, this is 7 shades of awesome.

[O!]

It wouldve been ur pinnacle if u were reading it!!! :-P

funny stuff...though wouldve loved to have heard it read instead.

x,
O!

[DeAn]

hay, wad up wid dis? yoo be makin fun of us spell checkers peeple? dat is sooo wong.

but gooood poutry.

lubbed it!

-Deen

[Dianne]

From the title I was trying to decide if this was about barnyard fowl or cooking, but now I see that it is about lub gone afoul. Wonderful wit!

[R J Askew]

Arf, arf, wonderful stuff...I thought "best do a bit of reading." And the moment I saw the title of this one I had to read it. I actually thought it would be about Orpington Buffs! A great laugh. Pure Far Side. Not as good as the A DAY IN THE LIFE OF A URINAL CAKE...so definitely not your pinnacle!

[Lily1111]

This one gave me quite a chuckle.

[Larissa G.]

I'm impressed. I have a hard time using accents or different ways of speaking. You did a good job. It was cute. :)

[Ray Hamilton]

This one gave me a chuckle, I would not be able to write this because I couldn't use spell check LOL
Thanks for the chuckle Ray { Not a Poet }

[Emily B]

It took me a minute to get with the program. Lack of sleep or something I reckon. But, oh, how clever! The title dragged me in--running! Just because.

[Windy]

OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ACTUALLY DID THAT. IT'S IS SO CUTE, SORRY I CANT THINK STRAIGHT ENOUGHT RIGHT NOW TO WRITE LIKE THE OTHERS HAVE TO GO WITH ROBIN ON THIS ONE. LOL PINNACLE? ISN'T THT A PHONE CO.? LOL JUST ADORABLE AND I LOVE CHICKEN(THOUGH NOT REALLY CAJUN) THAT WAS CAJUN LINGO WASN'T IT?? OK 3AM, I'M A GONER. WILL BE READING THIS AGAIN TOMORROW. LMAO...SMILES AND HUGS