Ripples

Ripples

A Poem by Legolas

Ripples in the stream
down where Sakura trees grow-
fade with the sunset

© 2013 Legolas


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Ah, yet again you do not disappoint.

You're so subtly descriptive in a way that leads the reader's imagination wherever you choose. For instance, with this one I see a peaceful stream under a Sakura tree, bathed in the colors of a slowly fading sunset; it's stunning!

Keep writing, my friend!


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Legolas

7 Years Ago

Thank you!



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Ah, yet again you do not disappoint.

You're so subtly descriptive in a way that leads the reader's imagination wherever you choose. For instance, with this one I see a peaceful stream under a Sakura tree, bathed in the colors of a slowly fading sunset; it's stunning!

Keep writing, my friend!


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Legolas

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
This is a beautiful Haiku.. a timeless piece indeed!!! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Legolas

8 Years Ago

Thank you!:)
Nice Haiku...Enjoyed...SyberRose

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Legolas

9 Years Ago

Thanks

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Added on April 23, 2013
Last Updated on April 23, 2013
Tags: haiku, ripples, stream, sakura, poem

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Legolas
Legolas

Rivendell, Middle Earth



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I love writing haikus. I don't know if my poems are good. You can read them and see what you think. There is a short novel/story that is not finished. I'm not sure if I will upload the remaining .. more..

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