Moonlight

Moonlight

A Poem by Peyton Light
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I've been going through some tough stuff lately

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Moonlight in the night sky

Calms the souls of misty eyes

While tears are shed

We're captured by dread

After saying a last goodbye

© 2017 Peyton Light


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Peyton Light
Just a short poem

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Very powerful words. Captures a moment in time susinctly.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As much as this poem is awesome on many levels, it does fall flat a tad on musicality. Line 1 could do with one syllable more, and line 4 could with one less, and line five: "a" could be "our" (though this doesn't have to change, I just find it a more powerful image). Just some thoughts, you may do with them as you will.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I can tell you've been going through a rough time. This poem has a lot of emotion and use of great imagery. I liked this piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely captures an ongoing battle in a short and powerful way

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this poem. I like that it is short, but I also would like to keep reading more.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple and to the point, I like it

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 13, 2016
Last Updated on January 31, 2017
Tags: Sad, Life, Moonlight, Eyes, Goodbye

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Peyton Light
Peyton Light

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