Free Falling

Free Falling

 

Haul me down

No pause

No stopping

Just free falling.

 

Going down towards the unknown

Where angels fear to tread

And devils lurk in the shadows

Towards a past so dreadful, so grim.

 

I wish I was lighter

Let air resistance keep me floating

Let physics play its role on me

But I’m just too outwardly

Too…alien.

 

Is this life?

Free falling, never stopping?

Is this the way to live?

Is death really the end of it all,

Or is there something more to it?

Something worse, something more frightening.

 

 

 

Author's Note

I know it's bad...any way to improve?

Reviews

[Pax]

its a great start for a insightful life you'll have... i never thought life can be a free falling, perhaps most of the time , often times it isn't...

for example in terms of love, you free fall and chances are someone will catch you or not...

in a way perhaps free falling is almost like keep moving on/keep moving forward, only a few moments pause for a break but never a full stop...

death, its frightening indeed... and i also think there is more to it than its the end...

great piece my friend....

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thanks so much dear Paxy....it's always wonderful to hear your thoughts:-):-):-D.

[Pax]

hey you, it's been awhile... good to see you and read from you... and your most welcome :)

[s y e]

Wow, your description made me want to know more, you had me hooked from the title! It was an excellent write, something that some people can relate to.

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thankies Noodle:-):-):-D.

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. I wanted to know more. I did some jumping out of planes in my young days. Best feeling. Having no control and flowing with the breeze. The description in the poem made me desire to know more. Many reason to free fall. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thanks so much Coyote. Someday I wanna try doing that too:-):-):-D.

[Invisible]

it's perhaps simple, but simple in a good way. sometimes people go too overboard with descriptions and big words. not to demean you by saying this is juvenile or childlike or whatever word you want to use, I just mean that it's easy to understand and relatable to a certain degree, which is refreshing.

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thank you so much. I find it easier to relate when i write in simple language:-).

[Invisible]

indeed