Who I am

Who I am

A Poem by . o O (Deepest_Thoughts)
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The real me..

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Ice cold stare,
Yet flaming eyes,
Soul of darkness,
Pain inside.

Blackened heart,
Angered mood,
Evil spirit,
In Devil’s shoes.

Hope destroyed,
Faith no more,
Destiny shattered,
Life a void.

Nights are endless,
The thirst grows,
Life is pointless,
Craving for gore.

Innocent blood,
The search begins,
The taste of flesh,
Hate within.

 

Life in shadows,
Never seen,
Striking swiftly,
Senses keen.

Eternity alone,
Love is a tale,
Dreams don’t exist,
Hope is a fable.

Death in mind,
Suffering huge,
Nothing to gain,
Nothing to lose.

Maybe psychotic,
Probably deranged,
Mostly disturbed,
Poisoned brain.

Future a blur,
Time will tell,
Eternity on earth,
Forever in hell.

© 2009 . o O (Deepest_Thoughts)


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The outlook of life can be a bleak adventure and still we travel through this space within an existence that we create...we are as we wish to be...an interestingly expressed poem...

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is fantastically written with a terrific rhyme scheme, excellent flow, and expressed wonderfully. I loved the raw emotion, thank you for sharing this piece. I enjoyed it a lot, very well done. --Broken soul

Posted 11 Years Ago


I feel the I got inside a cold ice box...is it very dark..your flow is amazing
The wording.. excellent.
It seems a little sad...but .. good
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Posted 11 Years Ago



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