Summer Love

This is dedicated to the man who stole my heart...

I lay out on the deck, eyes half-closed...

Daydreaming of days soon to come...

My love is coming for me soon...

The cool water laps at the shore, calling me...

It slides over my feet, gently pulling, beckoning...

I slip into the waves, the water soothing my burning skin

It burns not only from the heat, but from passions unsatisfied...

My empty arms long for my lovers embrace...

I close my eyes and imagine him there with me...

Swimming through the silk-smooth water

I slowly stand, my cheeks salty wet.

Are they tears?

I no longer know...

I miss him so, my body, my heart...

They ache with longing...

My lips are cold.

They haven't been kissed in so long.

I am waiting...

Hurry to me, my love...

This summer is ours.

We must make new memories...

Together...

Come with me!

We'll dive through the waves, fingers intertwined...

Two halves of one whole...

Complete.

Author's Note

I love him so so so much!

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. such powerful and divine flowing from your precious heart.. there is a tinge of such sweet innocence accenting this writing as well.. yearning for the blessings of passion.. your word choices give it all away to me.. you have a young heart.. I loved this writing as it has a real fun loving and free-spirited feeling:

Hurry to me, my love...
This summer is ours.
We must make new memories...
Together...
Come with me!
We'll dive through the waves, fingers intertwined...
Two halves of one whole...
Complete.

Wow .. I would most likely find you very interesting in real life.. such freeness.. and ability want to make new memories.. letting old ones fall to the way side.. that is truly the only way to be.. a writer after my own heart!!! Thank you so much for sharing!!! =)

[BABSIE BEE]

Ohhhh how I love this. My kinda poem girl !!! You describe a true loving passion which is obviously two way !! It is soooo difficult waiting for that time to come. Enjoy when it does. makes the time more special. Thank you for sharing your lovely lovely piece of work.
Babsie Bee xx

[Niko Azazel]

this is cute

[Thunderlyrics]

I am loving this one as well. *sigh* It must be nice!

;-)

[DC Gentleman]

wow.. thats love. I love the line blurring the ocean with tears... hope he comes back soon..

Excellent write...

[17thWhitePrince]

WoW !!!
Very nice indeed !!!
What a lovely piece !!!
So beautifully written !!!