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Inspired by sweet friend Rusty

Life is trifle with empty words and deeds that dominate the soul as a slave to the King  Unable or unwilling to feel the effects  afraid of succumbing to its torment   As words fly freely from mouths of fools To witlessly mumble wistless words that leave the heart void of indubitable nuance  my lips utter words only of truth.

Reviews

[EMF]

Wow. A true delight. Powerful and direct, but with an intricacy of language that is a joy to read. Sometimes on here, I randomly click on an author. Just close my eyes and click. Sometimes, most times if I am honest, I come up with perfectly servisable work. But sometime, like now, I reveal a diamond to myself. And this work is a diamond. Stunning

[TKBickel]

You do have a way with words that isn’t the abc basic. That’s why I’m not very good with writing poetry. I’m basic as the solid ground where you are smooth and fluent as the changing wind.

[Chris]

nice intent...

[smkb90]

Beautifully written, the title is perfect. Short and to the point. Wonderful poem!

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully worded.

[Clayton Bardwell]

Tus palabras son muy bonitas mi amiga. ¡Ole!

[Liderien]

lay bare, expose

[Rusty]

Please. Could you translate the title for us mono-language folks.

That said you have a fine way of loading depth into a few seemingly simple stanza's.

Really quite amazing and thanks for the nod.