My genetics

Spur of the moment. I haven't been on in a while so I figured since I just wrote this a few minutes ago I would post it.

I am everything you never wanted / I am someone that you never needed
I am trouble- and Im a burden / Im the reason you do drugs
when you are hurting

I am the defenition of negativity / I am pollution that you never want to breathe
I am cynical- I am beaten / Im the reason you have scars
for every season

I am bleeding for you
While Im dreaming of you
Use my body as your bridge
To reach your goals

I was living for you
Now Im dying to prove
You cant rely on me
Only rely on you

You are my medication lately / You are my love and you still hate me
You are screaming- from just seeing / The way my mind works to
deal with grieving

You are everything beautiful / Your something larger then life
Your amazing- I am nothing / I taught you how to crawl
And now your running

I feel so underated

I feel so suffocated

I feel like an artists painting

That they want to erase....

Reviews

[timcampbell]

rhythm is amazing in this poem. i agree with Legion, i could hear this put to music.

[Legion]

I like that. Especially the teaching to crawl/now running bit. That was a great line. I think this would make an interesting song with the right music. Kudos.