my last breath

Im running

soak in my own blood

running for my life

i have slashes across my face

im half blind

looking behind me

im running as fast as my legs can take me

my sight is going out

it's like an mile i've ran now

my feet is falling off

i can't feel my legs

i feel weak

i'd lost alot of blood now

there's an bundle of things going through my mind

im trying to hind but i can't

my body feels like its been crushed by an car

like i've been stuck in tar

i might look like an retard

im half way there to my destination

estimating how much time i have left to live

i tripped over an rock

im falling watching my face getting closer to the ground

my face smashed in the earth's crust

im laying there lifeless

im priceless

im trying to stand up

all my bones are breaking

im dizzy and my sight is blurry

limping my way down the road

kids screaming

yelling for their mom's

im deaf

i paused

an untamed pain unleased

i fell to my knees

holding my head

trying to scream

but my voice is gone

i feel alone

and on my own

im not even grown

my flesh is torn

im on my last breath

my hand reaching out for the sun

i reached in my pocket

and got an gun

i pionted it to my head

about to pull the tigger

my last energy gave out

the gun dropped

my heart stopped

Reviews

[Morgster]

You have a boyf?!you never told meee!who is it?:D

[Amanda Naomi]

well the grammar was off in places but it suited the poem, because if you're dying you don't really care about grammar, you just want to let someone know what happening...i thought it was a very intersting piece, being inside the head of someone who know's their about to die.

very nice piece

[Zana]

my boy friend didnt like this poem because he said he don't want me to died like that!!!!!