Losing a Battle

I stand there.

The sun is up.

My pain is so hard to bare.

I go into the kitchen and grab a cup.

I need someone to talk to.

The clock begins to chime.

I really don't know what to do.

A bird flies by the window the size of a lime.

Time passes by so slow.

I put a knife to my throat.

Blood starts to flow.

It gets all over my coat.

Slowly, I start to fall,

but I don't hit the floor.

I'm leaned against the wall.

I don't think I can hold on anymore.

Darkness isn't far,

yet neither is the light.

I begin to shine like a star,

as I take flight.

It's time to say goodbye.

My soul leaves a shell behind.

An angel glides by.

I don't really mind.

There's no need to fight on,

because I'm already gone.

Author's Note

This just came to mind. What do you think?

Reviews

[Rahul]

It's a painful write and life's a battle foresure but make yourself so strong thereby you could beat everyone in this battle and not go alone like "gone, gone"...
there;s still need to fight till you get the end of this battle and this's your battle, life's your own battle, no other one can grab this and no one can beat you, defeat you in your this battle if you honestly think life's your own battle and you gotta reach at the top and keep fighting until you win this battle.
life's already filled with a lot of harsh things...good things....bad things...ugly things but it's fact and the fact is true that life's one and life's really very beautiful...so, live your everyday as a new light, in a new way to overcome your limitations of living and walk along the life.
just forget the past, forget the future, you're real and life's real, frnds're fake but enemy's're real...so, just live your life because life's one and live without hide in present.
forget them all who tole you, you ain't better, forget them all who laugh on you, if you know where you stand and where can stand no one can defeat you...

"NEVER GIVE UP", these three words're simple to speak but when we apply these three words in and on our life then these tree words can help us to win and help us to leave as well.
depends on us...not others....

conclusion :), make yourself so strong thereby no one can tease you, beat you, defeat you and make yourself so powerful so that no one can grab your life's moments...!
life;s a battle, this tittle's damn and damn great reading and i wanna give you 100/100 but you should really have to write it's IInd version on it because here in this piece you've mentioned that "there;s no need to fight, she's gone already"
and in IInd version, you should have to show life's a real battle, it's a war and there's neeed to fight and she'll be fight till she gets her last breathe ...

congress for your this success "Lil Guppy" :), nice write and i wish you'll soon follow my words :)

[Lil Guppy]

Wow thanks for the review. I'm glad you understood what I was trying to say. I'll try my best to follow your words. :)