One Last Time

A fictional poem I made, I'm not sure what kind of poem this is, uhhh, could someone please tell me

Step by step

I walk across the pathway

Filled with pebbles

Looking at the autumn leaves fall

Onto the ground as time

Passes by

I breathe in
I am so joyful I could cry

I feel somewhat alive again

I look into my horizons

I may not be here a long

But I’ll make it last

Forever and ever

I look at my love one last time

Now my love has been

Pulled away out of my sight

Now, in the void, I shall never reach the light

Author's Note

Please tell me

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I think your words would benefit by a change of layout, for example

step by step
I walk across the oathwsy
filled with pebbles

looking at
the autumn leaves fall
onto the ground as time
passes

It would be much easier for the reader and they can pause instead of hurrying.

Hope this helps you lilac lilies (gorgeous name)

Chris