Drown

i'm sinking. 

going further down

than i intended to.

the water fills my lungs,

i feel it burning me 

inside and out. 

don't try to save me,

baby i'll just drag you

down with me.

everything is fading,

all i want is you with me.

but i'm too busy

drowning in my

past. 

Reviews

[Norah]

I love it! especially the ending, a really great poem overall

[C Peril]

I quite enjoyed this poem. I like how you mirror drowning with receding into the past. Good job.