Her

The rain kissed my lips

When I realized it was you

I felt even better

Author's Note

Simple poem

Reviews

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

Short and passionate! A good write! :)

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

I love it when eyes are closed and you are not expecting anything, but you are swept away by a magical kiss.

[RiverRei]

This is so sweet :) Very romantic! I'm not sure I've ever read anything short like this and have it be sufficiently romantic. Very nicely done! Thank you for sharing :)

[Sesame]

Hi Limnoh,

Nice, sounds like something that someone could write on a napkin, leaving me confused and looking around me to find out who wrote it.

Regards, Sesame

[Confuser]

LimnoH: Simple is sometimes very good, like this short poem. So sweet and delivers great emotional impact and beautiful, lovely imagery. Thank you so very much. Dale

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice use of words. Left the reader with good vision and place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[D.T.]

This is sweet and while short and simple, you can still feel tons of emotion from it.

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW amazing, so Beautiful, cute, passionate and ADORABLE! Love it

[Nadia B.]

Very sweet moment you have captured, a mini movie plays in my head, thank you for sharing! One question though, if I may, how different does it read simply by changing the last line of your Haiku from "I felt even better," to "It felt even better." ...? Does it add to the story? Please don't change the original, just food for thought. Please keep writing!

[dan]

LimnoH, Sometimes the simplest of poems have the most to say. This is tremendous. take care...dan