The Measure of the Circle

The Measure of the Circle

A Poem by LR Young

come circumference,
come casualties,
what antediluvian remedy,
or tonic - what other spaces
can I inhabit
when I don't remember learning
the how in all this, the end is
almost over, it's just beginning to swell,
curtains or blossoms, growing up in
imaginary fields: unconscious
ones, unified ones, theories.
I can smell the spade when
it pierces the earth, the dark
continent. My up-ended
contents: I have parts of me
that feel white, almost
virginal, like first wildernesses,
first snows. circumstances.
Parting waters in one long boat,
and one oar only to steer. I see temples
in the lines of your using hand, the one
you make with, and trials
in your other, the one you came with . You come
graced and unshaven, bending
with a divided mind, but
nonetheless into
the nectar when it's offered.

© 2009 LR Young


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I don't know what it is about this poem, maybe the pleading nature of it , but it just made me think of every heartbreak I have endured -- romantic ones, artistic ones, employment ones -- it really is beautiful. You have a way with words that I envy. The ability to use words that make the reader almost have to open a dictionary so as to properly follow your train of thought. That's a great talent and you use it beautifully and in all the right places. You have become my favorite writer on here and I'm glad I went through my friends list and found you. Well done, darlin.

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I don't know what it is about this poem, maybe the pleading nature of it , but it just made me think of every heartbreak I have endured -- romantic ones, artistic ones, employment ones -- it really is beautiful. You have a way with words that I envy. The ability to use words that make the reader almost have to open a dictionary so as to properly follow your train of thought. That's a great talent and you use it beautifully and in all the right places. You have become my favorite writer on here and I'm glad I went through my friends list and found you. Well done, darlin.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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LR Young
LR Young

Boulder, CO



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LR Young completed her Masters in Literature in Spring of 2009. Her current emphasis is poetry, the intimacy of words and string of consciousness revelations, rhythm and imagery. It is just as Ginsber.. more..

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