Move

Move

A Poem by Avoiry

The room looks at the people
The people look at the floor
The floor looks at the cealing
and the window looks toward the door
The door looks to the house
The house looks toward the street
The street looks toward the city
And i just stare at my feet....

© 2013 Avoiry


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So many eyes, staring, piercing, penetrating. The pressure can be unbearable, at times. A powerfully succinct piece. Nicely done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Avoiry
Avoiry

taipei, TX



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The Facts My name is Avoiry. I like to do a lot of things but we don't need to get into that. I'm a closet cynic , a pro pretender, a verbal arms dealer, and a false eye lash applicator in training. .. more..

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