You

You

A Poem by Amanda
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Long ago

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For so long

I stood so strong

But now I fall apart

Tears flow down

Silently bound

As I try to repair my broken heart

Emotions overcome me

How you hurt me you cannot see

Because I was

 

Afraid to have a voice

Afraid to speak

My heart is shot

My brain is weak

 

I cannot go on,

The pain from you

Say goodbye

 

We are through

© 2008 Amanda


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nice write Amanda...i think poetry runs in the family. :) what the hell is up with all these people with eyeballs for pictures?!?! you have two on this page alone!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Sometimes we just have to cut our losses and move on. Nice Write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I have felt like this. Always trying to be a strong one but never having a chance to fall. Well formed!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Aww this is such a nice poem. A bit sad, but still nice.

Ps- thx 4 the review :)~

Posted 15 Years Ago



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