Never walked away

Never walked away

A Poem by Crystal hearts
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A poem about how someone never gave up and stood there til the very end

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I know I don’t deserve you

I know I did wrong

but you never walked away from me

this freedom i have is a little more than i can handle

so I ask you to help me

keep my innocence

keep your love

when I done

wrong

you love me

you never walked away

so thank you

I can write about anything but

I chose to talk about you

I chose to stay close to you

since you saved me

thank you

I’m honored you waste

anytime at all on me

so I’m forever yours

© 2016 Crystal hearts


Author's Note

Crystal hearts
I think that it must be such an great feeling to have someone like that also it's my 3rd poem! What did you think about? And thank you for reading

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You're lucky to have a person like that, and they're also lucky to have you as greatful friend. Nice poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Crystal hearts

7 Years Ago

I would be great to have someone i wouldn't know that feeling but thank you so much the review
Stardust

7 Years Ago

You're welcome!
I loved the poem, you could perfectly do a rhyme here and it would sounded PERFECT if you did.
finding a person like that isn't hard, you just don't fake things, live up your life as you are and your second half will just show up front of you
keep up the good work


Posted 7 Years Ago


Crystal hearts

7 Years Ago

Thank You so much for taking time to write me an review i would definitely try to add more rhymes i.. read more

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Added on August 14, 2016
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Crystal hearts
Crystal hearts

New YORK, NY



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Hello and welcome my world full of magic adventure love and friendship. I'm 16 and been writing poetry and stories for a while now and would love to share my writing. My inspiration mostly comes from .. more..

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