I'm Done

This is actually a song i wrote...

Verse One:
I'm,,,,,, Done!
Done with looking back
At the life of
Happiness i once had
Looking at the scars
From times passed
Causing more pain
Done with this life...

Chorus:
I'm done!
Done with love
Done with
getting hurt!
Tired of the pain
And stress!
Lying awake,
Sleepless at night!
I'm Done!

Verse two:
Tome to move on
Get away from
This love life
Holding me back
Time to start
A new life
One where I'm free
Not so kind
Where I'm violent
And protective
Got to become who
I want to be
Who I need
To be...

Chorus:
I'm done!
Done with love
Done with
getting hurt!
Tired of the pain
And stress!
Lying awake,
Sleepless at night!
I'm Done!

Verse Three:
Get away from me!
You never did
Anything right!
I gave you my
Love!
But you threw
That away!
No one ever
Heard my screams!
You left me
To die
Alone inside...

Chorus:
I'm done!
Done with love
Done with
getting hurt!
Tired of the pain
And stress!
Lying awake,
Sleepless...
Sle-----ples!!!
I'm done!
Done with love
Done with
getting hurt!
Tired of the pain
And stress!
Lying awake,
Sleepless....
Sleepless at night...
I'M DONE!

Reviews

[A.G Franke]

like how it turns from you just saying your done to you getting angry! they only mistake I notice, "tome" which should be "time" I beilive in verse two. Beside that all the grammer and speelling which is more than I can do! =P good work!

[Lover109]

Comment and tell me what you think or what i should changed about it(: