Love at first sight virtually?

This is the first part of the story. Its a story about a girl who tells about her live and love.

Love at first sight virtually?

‘’ Do you believe in Love at first sight? Well I don’t believe in it. How can someone possibly fall in love with an random person, who they never met or something… I just can’t believe in it, but my friends are the opposition. They believe in it, they say that mine mind will change if it will happen to me. They all been through it. Through the Love at first sight time, I didn’t even know it was a time? Is it a time? Or did they just made that up? Tell me..’’

 

She tells…

School was ending and it was another boring day. We were leaving school and ride home, me and my friends. When they go right I go left, we say goodbye and then… Then the loneliness is starting. My parents aren’t home either, they have to work late every day. I put my bag on table and take out my I phone, going on some social media looking at pictures and status of people. Those people having a better life than me. I am just here… boring at home doing nothing. I do have friends but they are just people who I hang out on school with. I do love one think, it is called Anime. Anime I really like that! Every day I watch it until late, I buying Anime stuff like: pillows, Manga’s, toys and stuff. I guess I am a little childish for an fifteen year old girl. As I walked above the telephone rings, I walk back to the living room to pick up the phone, it is mine mom. Mom ‘’ Sorry honey, we are late again. But we got a great present for you!’’ Pfff they are always giving me these gifts… I don’t want their gifts. Mom ‘’ We be back in a few hours, just order a pizza or something! L-ov-e y….’’ Phone got engaged I guess.  I walk back upstairs, lays on my bed and goes on the web. I love being alone at my room, no one who can bother me, only me and my world. As I go on some sites for new released Anime shows, I see a link to an site. The site is about a commercial about an Anime app. An app called Manga Anime Time. For short MAT. MAT? I searched it up out of bordness in the app store and downloaded. Waiting waiting and again waiting. ‘’ Bliep ‘’ Oh it finished the download. As I put in on, I enter a virtual world. A world you can imagine. It is beautiful so beautiful. All these characters, shows, stories, drawings and so much more. My character design was kind of already made. I looked around and so a button with chats. Chats? I clicked on it, and again I was in this blank world. With nothing around me it was like I was standing for this big door wat is saying ‘’ Chats ‘’ I enter the door and when I enter … I see thousands of doors and people walking into the doors and talking. As I walk further I looked around, people were looking at me, why? People never look at me, why would they look at me now? Do I look weird? As I look how my appearance looks, I bumped against a chat door. Ouch?! I look up and sees a sign with ‘’ Café CHAT’’ I open the door and enters this new world in, when I looked back at the door, the door was gone. I look back again and see people sitting at tables, at a bar, I see waiters walking and waitresses. Everyone looks happy, I walk peacefully further as a quiet mouse. Looking left and right and couldn’t believe it. And again I bumped into someone and felled on the ground. Ouch?! Again?! I looked up and sees someone in front of me, he hands out his hand. He ‘’ Are you ok?’’ His appearance was…. How do you say that? This feeling, it was warm, lovely, I got this feeling in my stomach. He ‘’ hey? Are you ok??’’ He looked worried, about who? Me? As I forgot he was talking to me, I dreamed away. And bam out of the blue my mom came into my room. My virtual world felt down and I was back in my room. In my boring room. Mom ‘’ Hi honey! We got home earlier for you! As an surprise!’’ I looked surprise but on the same time I want them to be gone. They ruined everything, this feeling it is gone until I think back at that moment. I blushed when I think back. Mom ‘’ Sweetheart are you all right? You look like you have a fever. ‘’ As my mom felt my head, I was still thinking about what happened. Mom ‘’ Sweetheart you  burning up! You should go to sleep and you are not going to school tomorrow!’’ My mom put me into bed.. I didn’t talk to her, I only was thinking I can go back tomorrow. Back to that world. Back to…him. Yes for some reason I wanted to see him again. That guy who asked me if I was all right. I didn’t reply as I couldn’t. Before I knew it I was sleeping. The next day that I woke up, I looked at the clock it says 9:00 AM. My parents were all ready gone to work. I walked downstairs and see a note on the table, it is from mom. Mom’s note ‘’ Sorry honey, that we can’t take care of you. We have this big chance, what you only can get in a life time.’’ As a laugh a bit, I think about them saying that all the time. I start to continue reading. Mom’s note ‘’ We made some soup for you, also there are some blankets and some medicine. Love you x mom.’’ I know I am not sick, but somehow I feel like I am sick.  After my breakfast and shower I looked at my phone, shall I go or…? I take my phone and open it, I enter the world again, see the big doors, doors such as ‘’ Main feed’’, ‘’Friends’’, ‘’Chats’’ ‘’ Profiles’’ and a lot more! I know which door I want to  enter, I walk to the door chat and searches the ‘’Café CHAT’’ I found it, the doors has an doorbell, if you use that u saved the door. I press on the doorbell and before I knew it I was in the café again and the café was saved in my email book. I look around, around, around for him. Yes him. Where is he? Where? As I look at the table I feel a hand on my shoulder I turn around and see him. It is really him. He ‘’ hi, do you remember me? ‘’ He is talking to me? Yes he is. I do remember you I said. He smiled and said good, and ask why I didn’t reply anymore. I told him the story and he laughed and said it was all right. I couldn’t believe he was talking to me. He asked me to go to an private door and pointed at another door, the door said ‘’ PM ‘’ It means Private messages. Only he and I can see it. As he takes me to the other room, we talked for hours. This was our first real conversation. As days pass by, and my life began to shine. I talked to him every day, we searches each other with different devices. We skype, only voice thought… But one day when we meet, I know for sure he, and me are together one. My friends said I shouldn’t skype with strangers, it is dangerous. But I know it isn’t, I just know. Every time we talked, I get this shot feeling inside me. They say it is called butterflies but by me it are big birds. Butterflies are to little for this feeling. After a while he asked me if we should start to skype with cam. I agreed with him, when the day arrived when we shall skype with a cam, my heart just bounced so heart, I was nervous. Nervous for what? Well maybe he don’t like my looks and will leave, or I just being awkward and stupid. I prepare myself to look good for the skype, I  went online and as I wait for his call… I’m getting more nervously. “ bliep bliep bliep ‘’ It is the skype phone call, after this moment I will see him and he me. How will he look like… Maybe he looks just not what I imagine. As I click on the green telephone and open the call, his screen turned on. I closed my eyes a minute before I looked. I open it and see him… I went quiet. Just quiet. He smiled at me and said that he just expected me to look like this and that I am beautiful. I couldn’t speak and cried a bit, why…? I just couldn’t believe. He ‘’ why are you crying? Did I do something wrong? Did I scare you? Talk to me! I am sorry’’ I was just tearing up and started to smile at him and said that I expected him to look like how he looks. He looks just his virtual him. His eyes went big and smiled. After that day we talked many days more… Time passes by when you are in love, but on the same time it looks like time is standing still. Because if I didn’t went to that chat I never would met the man I am married to. “

‘’ Well I believe know in love at first sight… and I believe that people can married when they meet online. A lot of people don’t believe that people can meet each other in real life, because maybe of the distance between them. I lived in the Netherlands and he… he lives in the US. After I was old enough I went to the US to meet him. After 5 years waiting we met. It has been 5 years…’’

Author's Note

I hope you like it! IT isn't that great I know but i really enjoy making these!!

Reviews

[Hope Gabrielle]

I think this has a great story to it if you could develop it a little bit more! Try breaking up your work with paragraphs to help the reader understand more clearly what is going on and throw in a bit more descriptions of what is happening or what the scene you are imagining looks like. Besides for that and a few grammar errors, the story you have is great!

[Lotte]

Thank you! I really appreciate your honesty. I will try my best!! ^^