"I want..."

well...i was in a strange mood today,somewhat confused actually. i just put words on paper. bored. not my best.

                                   I want…

 

I want to touch, but don’t want to feel.

 

I want to hear, but not understand.

 

I want to see, but not believe.

 

I want to learn, but not comprehend.

 

I want to love, but not embrace.

 

I don’t want to live, but don’t want to die…

 

Author's Note

not a good day for me, little confused, so i put it on paper. FEEL FREE TO COMMENT!!!

Reviews

[Jim Clarke]

This captures the irony of life. Very wise and insightful. Keep writing.

Let me know if you enjoy my story.

Jim

[Silvario]

Very nicely done. I enjoyed this. Not bad at all for something that emerged out of boredom :p hehe

You get across, with ease and style, a feeling I think we all have from time to time. A sense of just wanting to be, is what I call it.

Once again, well done. Keep it up! :)

[Lakurie]

I like it, it is pretty much how most of us go day by day. We just go on the surface of things and actions, we dont want to get into the deep stuff because we are too busy with other things... but at the same time, even though we are not getting out all we could, we still dont want to die... but we still go through things only in "half".

[Markymark]

This reminds me of a song. With a little tightening up it could shine! Every Line begins with I want, except the last. Did you mean to do that?

I still like it as it is-

Markymark