Broken Promise

Broken Promise

A Poem by H0P3L3$$ !N$@N!TY(Luna)

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Broken Promise
My heart has been crushed yet again
My soul has shattered
He said I love you
I thought he meant it
But he left me bloody and battered
I open the scars of years ago
Letting the blood flow through once more
I begin to cry as I remember him
I blast the music through my core
The lyrics rippled through my body
I collapsed on my bed
Blood stained my pure white sheets
I shrieked as my wrists bled
I hate life, I hate love!
I pulled out a gun and muttered my last words
"I hope you suffer! I cant believe you lied!"
I Pulled the trigger and immediately died
Nobody cares
I was just an emotional, anti-social wreck
I killed myself and died bleeding
Fragile fingers and soft, lifeless eyes
Because the reality is
Everyone dies.

© 2010 H0P3L3$$ !N$@N!TY(Luna)


Author's Note

H0P3L3$$ !N$@N!TY(Luna)
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Yeah they sure do, lol I wrote like 3 poems about that a while ago. This is strong amazingly strong emotion. It is just awesome! It's strong and so descriptive you have an amazing talent! Keep up the good work!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 18, 2010
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Hi im Luna... i love wolf's and i love to write, Read, Sing, Draw, and be alone. I'm more of a Loner and tend to kept to myself but i hope i can be friends with someone? -✘Luna✘- .. more..

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