Hypocrites

Hypocrites 

Suck the life out of the living

Brings them down in anyway

Kills the insides with the disease of hate

Hypocrites

Don't stop

Want to kill them

Bring them down in anyway 

Don't care if they die

Hypocrites

Demolish the love

The love of all 

But Don't you see

Hypocrites

They are us all

Author's Note

Sorry for this is bad, I cannot unclog my mind of everything. I am confused at the moment in time, please ignore grammar problems, or any mistakes this may have. Than you.

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

I think being a hypocrite is a religious experience for a few because they take it much much longer into their life than they would have their BS or lies that never had a chance!! Saying that, I totally get that last couplet at the end of the poem where I had my "Aha!" moment. lol The first stanza, even though I agree with you and understand it, could only make me think that the ones that are like this.... help along the creation of inspiration in others who wish to "top" the BS before them, and be recognized for something they are good at and BETTER than the source of the BS hypocrisy that started all of it. ; ) It's a clever little poem and I'm glad you kept it up for me to read it!! xoxo -Mark