The love of yours
A Poem by Gabby
The love of yours Brightens my heart with joy
The love of yours Is the happiness of my day
The love of yours Makes me want to dance with no care
The love of yours Makes me sing like a bird filled with delight
You are the only thing that makes me happy Don't ever leave
© 2012 Gabby
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Beautiful poem!! I Love the shape, too, though I don't think a comment about saying it looking like the form of a Christmas tree will help sell the idea that I think of this poem as hopeful, peaceful, and you paint this picture that I have wished to return to in my High school years. You make it hard for me to not want to run up to you and hug you. lol I Love it. It's short, a bit hard to see, and feels a little cramped in there with no space above and below the poem to make it stand out, but overall, I really like it. xoxo -Mark
Posted 10 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Beautiful poem!! I Love the shape, too, though I don't think a comment about saying it looking like the form of a Christmas tree will help sell the idea that I think of this poem as hopeful, peaceful, and you paint this picture that I have wished to return to in my High school years. You make it hard for me to not want to run up to you and hug you. lol I Love it. It's short, a bit hard to see, and feels a little cramped in there with no space above and below the poem to make it stand out, but overall, I really like it. xoxo -Mark
Posted 10 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Added on November 22, 2012
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