This World

This World

A Poem by Gabby

This world
Another planets hell
This world
All of beauty and delight
Do we see the real meaning though?
The meaning of this world?
Of life?
Of the music we compose
Of the art we create with just a simple thing call 
Imagination. 
This world
Full of hypocrites
This world
With amazing truthful people
Unlike most
Unlike me
A liar
A hypocrite 
A judgmental beast
Just filled with hatred and envy
This world
Where we have been born
To become the wild murderers that sneak through the night
Causing trouble
Causing worry
Causing hell the all that is peaceful
Being loud, never getting along
This world
Another planets hell

© 2013 Gabby


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This is the one poem that I have no idea what to say AND because you sound like a girl I know that is as amazing as that fire in your gut that you think is some sort of hindrance to some of us. Some of us LOOKED for a girl like you in our lives and we have not succeeded in making ourselves aware, for fear of the spoken word was much more terrifying than that of stealing a kiss in the dark with you to soothe a beast we could not understand ourselves, Gabby!! Damn, you have such a fire in you!! I hope you have to suffer 100's of people in your life that end up falling in Love with you. lol *Big Hugzz* Wherever you choose..... in open air, in an old iron maiden for "kicks", or just before jumping off the Cliffs of Moher with me in Ireland, just give me a hug. : ) This world is on borrowed time and I'm sure we all have our own screwed up roles to play in it whilst we are alive to affect it in a way while our breath swells and fills with the air that has entered and left the billions of lungs before us here, since the dawn of man/woman. I could give 2 s***s if you are a "judgmental beast" or you consider yourself a liar. I really like you and kinda wish I didn't because I'm not used to liking too many. : ) *still in that hug* xoxox -Mark





Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is the one poem that I have no idea what to say AND because you sound like a girl I know that is as amazing as that fire in your gut that you think is some sort of hindrance to some of us. Some of us LOOKED for a girl like you in our lives and we have not succeeded in making ourselves aware, for fear of the spoken word was much more terrifying than that of stealing a kiss in the dark with you to soothe a beast we could not understand ourselves, Gabby!! Damn, you have such a fire in you!! I hope you have to suffer 100's of people in your life that end up falling in Love with you. lol *Big Hugzz* Wherever you choose..... in open air, in an old iron maiden for "kicks", or just before jumping off the Cliffs of Moher with me in Ireland, just give me a hug. : ) This world is on borrowed time and I'm sure we all have our own screwed up roles to play in it whilst we are alive to affect it in a way while our breath swells and fills with the air that has entered and left the billions of lungs before us here, since the dawn of man/woman. I could give 2 s***s if you are a "judgmental beast" or you consider yourself a liar. I really like you and kinda wish I didn't because I'm not used to liking too many. : ) *still in that hug* xoxox -Mark





Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

world's a fair unfair game,
cruel it gets and hard it is,
whining takes you nowhere good,
life's blossom and karma b***h..


Posted 11 Years Ago


i've felt that before.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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