Mistake?

Mistake?

A Poem by Gabby

Was this the right thing to do?
Let me be happy while the rest suffer
Break my best friends heart
Betray all thou trust?
It's my first time being happy
Is that wrong?
I've lost a friend, 
But I actually feel loved
Everyone yells saying it's a mistake
But to me it's not. 
To me it's life. 

© 2013 Gabby


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Beautiful.... and you are owning what you believe in. Just stay safe when your convictions are this strong and know that others have designs on changing their fates without you being in the mix for such plans to do so. Whether that is through their gossip, their actions, and/or ignorance... be careful. This is, finally with going backwards in your poems from the first one uploaded, a very nice poem to read and find it very easy to root you on, Gabby!! Someone like me who has not one friend to call on the phone is amazed at the personalities I have come across and befriended on poetry sites like this one because I read this poem and I start to wish that you are s happy and free as you sound. : ) Beautiful, Gabby.... xoxox -Mark





Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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Beautiful.... and you are owning what you believe in. Just stay safe when your convictions are this strong and know that others have designs on changing their fates without you being in the mix for such plans to do so. Whether that is through their gossip, their actions, and/or ignorance... be careful. This is, finally with going backwards in your poems from the first one uploaded, a very nice poem to read and find it very easy to root you on, Gabby!! Someone like me who has not one friend to call on the phone is amazed at the personalities I have come across and befriended on poetry sites like this one because I read this poem and I start to wish that you are s happy and free as you sound. : ) Beautiful, Gabby.... xoxox -Mark





Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Apple Valley, MN



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