Unlike you

Write me a letter of your love

Sing me a song from your heart

Hum me a rhythm the beat is strong

You say you love me baby

Could you be wrong?

I write these poems and songs for you

The ones that are sad and lonely

Mostly because of you

Sorry to say

Yet hopeless to know,

This beautiful poem is not, although

His beauty is kind

His words are sweet

The way he says my name

Nearly knocks me off my feet

He doesn't harm me

Or hurt me with words

He's in love with me

Isn't that absurd?

Unlike your words

Unkind and untrue

He makes me happy

Unlike you 

To be with you again? 

Ha, I'd rather be dead

Like I said, this poem,

Not because of you,

Because of someone who cares

Who is willing and true

Oh my love,

Oh my sweet sympathy 

Come to me 

Read me this poem so dearly

Sing me that song,

You wrote in your heart

While strolling with me

Humming your love

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Gabby wrote a Love poem!! This was sweet. : ) Sure, you tel off the insolent mess that made your life difficult in that beautiful head of yours, but you started and ended this wonderful poem with success, Gabby. In the beginning, you wrote "Sing my a song" and then the word "my" in the next line, but maybe you meant to write "me"? I wasn't expecting to read this. I was tricked!! lol From a few poems ago, I think I started to hug you, and this poem had welcomed me to step aside and see a beautiful response to what Love SHOULD sound like.... to me. It's respect, first, and I really like how you didn't divert from the intention and story-telling to get through this poem as if it were a Love letter. I have never received a Love letter in my whole life and don't know what a poem written for ME looks like, but would imagine it to have the effect this one may have had for the guy you wrote about. : ) ....and for him to read a poem for him from a beautiful girl like you?! That's like remembering your first kiss. Great job!! Beautiful, Gabby..... xoxo -Your Mark

[Sami Khalil]

A sweet poem.