My song

There is a song that flows through me

There is a song that moves in me

Its tones are the feelings of my heart

Its words are what make my mind stand apart

Written are notes that have been as stepping stones

In the form of laughter and groans

In each strain is something from before

Of what’s a part of me and makes this song more

Who I am is in this song

Too often has it been heard wrong

Everything it means has not been understood

All that makes it has not been grasped as it should

Without knowledge of each of these things

None can realize what this song sings

What is there for me to do but pretend

That anyone understands who I really am

 

Reviews

[KatiePie]

"Its words are what make my mind stand apart"
and
"Who I am is in this song
Too often has it been heard wrong"
made me literally gasp for air as they took my breath away, you have such talent! I love the way you write and the amazing beat and flow that it has to it. This piece is wonderful, the way it flows each word with a new drop of emotion,
Beautiful, wonderful, magnificent, are pale and grungy words compared to the feelings this gave me, I've readd a lot of work on here so far and let me be completely and totally honest.. NONE touched me like this one.
Keep up the good work

[SetApartGirl]

I really like this piece. It flows really well. The lines-"Too long has it been heard wrong, Everything it means has not been understood"-are all too true. So many times people misunderstand us or judge wrongly. Great write. Keep it up!

~Ken-san