Right from the start..

Right from the start..

A Poem by Lorame

In case you think I have regret
Wishing that we’d never met
You took the best part of me
But I always knew
It is how it would be

See, I always knew
Right from the start
You’d be the one
To break my heart
That moment we met
I’ll never forget
Everything was already done
 
In case you think you were right
In the way that you took flight
It’s what you could not prevent
And it didn’t matter
Whether you stayed or went

Because I always knew
Right from the start
You’d be the one
To break my heart
Yes I had to choose
To love though I’d lose
Everything was already done

Take your time to learn
You can’t just erase or burn
The leaves that fell 
From the sky as we met
The world was shaken
And I haven’t recovered yet

But I always knew
Right from the start
You’d be the one
To break my heart
That moment we met
I’ll never forget
Everything was already done

© 2010 Lorame


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I am speechless. There are no words in the whole world that can describe what I feel when I read this poem. It is overwhelming to me. In a good way. I love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm wondering if you have any poems that I will not completely relate too. A year ago was the ending of an almost seven year relationship with someone I adored and yet I always knew, knew right from the start that one day they would no longer be around. I have no regrets, I would never wish to erase those years. I just knew on my sixth year anniversary that we would not make it to the seventh. I am healed now, I have a terrible crush and in my heart I know you will heal too.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Im thinking a song it is.. but this was real good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I enjoyed the repetiion and evolution of process thinking in this poem. My favorite part if this poem is the following stanza: Take your time to learn
You can’t just erase or burn
The leaves that fell
From the sky as we met
The world was shaken
And I haven’t recovered yet
This is just beautiful to me. Love this poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sad, but true.
You put a lot of emotions into these, for I can feel them within me.
Amazing.
Truly, sincerely amazing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think it both a sad thing to see love end but an experience that makes us all human and gives depth to the soul

Posted 13 Years Ago



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