Wonder

Wonder

A Poem by Lorame
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Lyrics. About a friend.

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I catch myself from falling

See, I don’t call your name

But the satisfaction

Just isn’t the same

Why don’t you come and save me

From saving myself this time

You don’t know

You hold this heart of mine

 

All this time I wonder, wonder

How it all should be

And all this time I wonder, wonder

How you see me

And all this time I feel

That my confession

Has separated you and me

With a question

 

I catch myself from falling

See, I don't take your hand

But the greatest question

Is where I will land

Why don’t you come and save me

From walking away this time

You don’t know

You hold this heart of mine

 

All this time I wonder, wonder

How it all should be

And all this time I wonder, wonder

How you see me

And all this time I feel

That my confession

Has separated you and me

With a question

 

See, all this time I wonder, wonder

How it all should be

And all this time I wonder, wonder

How you see me

And all this time I feel

That my confession

Has separated you and me

With a question

And I start to wonder

If this has to be the end.

© 2011 Lorame


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Posted 13 Years Ago


The lyrics are phenomenal and the chorus is wonderful. You should put this to music. I'm not an expert on songwriting, but I like it very much. Yet, I know something about confessing something to someone you care about and seems to change everything.
Good work!
-Jeffrey

Posted 13 Years Ago


Amazing! Honestly! The rhyming and the repetition was simply perfect. I was wondering with you and could relate to this piece. I also feel separated by one question. Brilliant, Lorame. Nicely executed.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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