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Lyrics.

 

I knew you’d come

I knew you’d call me

But when you did I was away

When I came back

You were gone

Oh how I wish that you had stayed

Because I’m all alone

Facing the unknown

And I pray you haven’t let me go

If you come again

You will see then

I know now I need you so

 

So call my name

I will answer

This time I will not turn away

And take my hand

Lead me further

Don’t let me ever want to stray

Because I’m all alone

Facing the unknown

And I pray you haven’t let me go

If you come again

You will see then

I know now I need you so

 

Because I’m all alone

Facing the unknown

And I pray you haven’t let me go

When you come again

You will see then

I know now I need you so

Reviews

[Deviant Works]

Hehe... I just now read the added info to this. No wonder it sounded like a song.:) Sorry...

[Deviant Works]

Oh, this is was good. The rhyming was so well done that I heard, felt, read this as more of a song. Your words hard a silent beat to them, especially the last stanza which would make a great chorus with the right music. Obviously, I loved this. Thank you, Lorame.

[KatiePie]

I adore the rhythm of this, the way it flows makes every word bounce off the tongue. It was wonderful to read. :)
-Cathrine