Surprise

Surprise

A Poem by Lorame
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See how you want to see me

See how I’m in a dream

I laugh at the way

I look in your eyes

You need to see past the lies

See when you call me sweetheart

See how we’re far apart

I am so sorry

That I can’t be here

But I’ve never been that near

 

Can’t this thing be over

Can’t we just move on from the lies

I want you to be falling

You’ve got your head in the skies

You’re in for a surprise

When you finally see me

You’re in for a surprise

 

So can’t this thing be over

Can’t we just move on from the lies

I want you to be falling

You’ve got your head in the skies

You’re in for a surprise

When you finally see me

You’re in for a surprise

© 2011 Lorame


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This is great, Lorame. I am going to your my space page immediately to see if you have loaded this song. What I truly love about this piece is the addition of simply one word..."finally"..."When you finally see me". That one word causes such real emotion, shows that the pain has gone on long enough and I felt it myself in many ways. "You're in for a surprise"... It is funny how being torn down tends to make us stronger, makes us want to fight back all the more. Excellent once again.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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